Bahati - Issue #1 (2022)
Client: MadCloud Comics
Role: Co-Writer
LOGLINE
In the blink of an eye, the world changed. No one knows how or why it started, but it could happen to anyone. A hex torments the lands turning humans into the Cursed Ones. Bahati, a feared warrior, hunts for them in the dark corners of the world until a Cursed One calls to her. Now, her world has changed, what will she do?
ROLE
MadCloud Comics brought me in as a script doctor for Bahati #1—tasked with tightening the plot, sharpening character voice, and dialing up the emotional beats. I gave the script a full rewrite pass, leveling up everything from structure and pacing to dialogue and rhythm, while staying true to the story’s core. I also built out the blueprint for Issue #2, laying the groundwork for where the story heads next.